tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794922371170554936.post8199768936715908560..comments2013-11-23T09:44:24.997-08:00Comments on The Rayne Legacy: Generation 1~ Chapter 16~Teenage WastelandRainwifehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10771607321543938318noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794922371170554936.post-18607316024720120212011-10-14T04:28:36.144-07:002011-10-14T04:28:36.144-07:00Hey Jen! Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I think m...Hey Jen! Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I think my writing is still a little rough in spots, but I'm getting better all the time (at least I think...I could be WAY off base *lol*)<br /><br />All the kids are just adorable, Crimson and Hank really do make some beautiful babies! I have no doubt Crim will make it through this, and I know we haven't seen the last of Hank yet ;-p<br /><br />I didn't have much time to read yours, but I rally enjoyed it! Thanks for the follow as well :)Rainwifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10771607321543938318noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794922371170554936.post-4875042493982042812011-10-13T21:47:21.699-07:002011-10-13T21:47:21.699-07:00How sad that Hank has left Crimson and while she i...How sad that Hank has left Crimson and while she is still pregnant! Shame on him!<br />I think Crimson will come out of this alright though, she seems like a strong willed women. <br />Her kids are so cute, the twin girls are adorable and Sebastian is quite the looker, Crimson better keep her on him. lol<br />I love that shot of him coming down the slide btw, good one!<br /><br />I enjoyed the start of the chapter, very descriptive and it flowed really nicely. I felt like I could really imagine what Crimson was going through.<br /><br />Lovely job!<br /><br />Thanks for following too! :)Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04261344314447423273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794922371170554936.post-34520086509549200152011-10-13T05:36:25.525-07:002011-10-13T05:36:25.525-07:00@Jemstonlegacy and @Tommiegirl....I know, i felt b...@Jemstonlegacy and @Tommiegirl....I know, i felt brutal bad for poor Crimson, although at least that "Have 5 Children" wish got taken care of! The twins were a nightmare to try and raise, and the teens didn't really help the situation. They did assist with the twins (Exp Heather and Cuddles) but spent so much time fighting (you'll see what I mean next post) that they just added more stress to the situation.<br /><br />Thank god my toddlers are set to 4 days only! I don't know about Crimson, but I'm sure I would have gone crazy if it lasted much longer than that *lol*Rainwifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10771607321543938318noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794922371170554936.post-2466213991434948902011-10-12T07:53:41.174-07:002011-10-12T07:53:41.174-07:00Poor Crimson. She definitely has her hands full w...Poor Crimson. She definitely has her hands full with twin girls! And it doesn't help that Hank has already moved on.<br /><br />The good thing is that the house is full of teenagers, so they should be able to help out.<br /><br />I'm curious to see how she's going to pull this off.tommiegirl_cahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04129860171001334347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794922371170554936.post-26024758897700142702011-10-11T08:48:44.875-07:002011-10-11T08:48:44.875-07:00Twins?! Adorable! It seems like the Rayne househol...Twins?! Adorable! It seems like the Rayne household has it super rough right now between Hank being gone and the twins... but they'll make it through, I know it!<br /><br />Poor Crimson though. She needs some "me" time... There are 4 sets of teenagers, some of them should help with the twins :PAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794922371170554936.post-54309685353855891222011-10-11T02:43:51.589-07:002011-10-11T02:43:51.589-07:00Almost every IF I've turned real has been real...Almost every IF I've turned real has been really cute. If they didn't drive me so batty sometimes with the pranks and such I would turn every one of them!<br /><br />I literally loled when I saw what Crimson was teaching the kids. Guess we know where her heads at!Rainwifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10771607321543938318noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4794922371170554936.post-62265251416397086372011-10-11T02:24:52.706-07:002011-10-11T02:24:52.706-07:00Ahh Cuddles is so cute! I've never seen a chil...Ahh Cuddles is so cute! I've never seen a child IF turned real before, I don't have Generations so it's interesting to read about IF's in legacies.<br /><br />Love the words Crimson is teaching the toddlers! Too funny!CourtneyHelenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05637988184983855175noreply@blogger.com